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richie>

you seem like you have all your ideas together. however this seems more like a rough draft of an outline. 

1. make sure you have a clear thesis statement. just know the point your are trying to prove. 
2. then make sure it follows with evidence that supports what your saying. it would be a good idea to include more than just one point of evidence. there are allot of articles in the paper about teens who become addicted to video-games or movie and that leads them to committing crimes. finding stories like that for example might help you support your point. 
hope this was helpful. good luck richie :)

this sounds like it could be the start of a really great paper. it seems you know what you will be talking about. and you have types of evidence you need to back up your points. there is alot of recent news that i can think of that relates to your point, but also alot of events in the past. you should be able to find some interesting facts maybe about crime rate relating to video games. something like that, you have a great start here. the only thing to make sure of is that your arguments are organized. so the paper is easy to follow and not confusing. good luck max!