continued comments

dear EVAN,
you have a really goo d paper here. it has a good thesis and good ideas that support it. your sources are great and support everything your saying

when your are arguing about the internet and blogging. you could mention how that decreases written literature, while people are blogging information less people continue to pay and read the newspaper.
when you talked about social networking site i liked when you said "Social networking has gone as far as redefining the word friend. "

to be continued....i am sorry for not getting to complete my comment sooner.

POV: 2.5
Evidence: 3
Effective Organization: 4
Connections and Significance: 4
Opposing POV: 3
Communication Written: 3
Communication Performance: 3.5
total: 23