Hannah, your story was short and sweet. i liked it alot. i thought about the movie grease as i was reading it then read your last comment on the bottom. where both the girl and the guy play cool characters. it more or less seemed like one of those fantasy stories, where there is a Damsel in distress.

Ali Jo

i agree with Russell. this person is unique in the way they do not fall into what society dictates. this story was really well done, i love it and i wish it went on.

Larche GREAT JOB this was a cool story because it seems pretty realistic. Both characters fit a similar definition of cool. Like amber said one overshadows the other.

Max

i wrote a post before this, but never actually posted it. lets try this again. i liked your story. i will remember reading this one. i was a little shocking by the turning point in the story. where Pascal is this cool guy who gets by in all his classes, does well with the girls, and lives by his own agenda. there was more that meets the eye with Pascal. Good story

Richie

overall it does sound like the typical rebellious teen. To me this was written with exaggeration. which makes the message of your story more clear. good thinking